Taking advice from the Legal & General people I improved the slides in a variety of ways. These are the final products.
A major change I made was to input the text from the word document L&G made into the slides so it wasn't just placeholder text.
I was advised to change the style of the 3D looking car on the left as they felt it was inconsistent of the style. In order to make it consistent I drew a white line around the top of the car. When we pitched it again they were happy with how it looked.
For this slide I changed the black writing to white to make it easier to read on a bright red background.
